I saw a video in writing class. The video was about a person named 'Adora Svitak'. She looks like 12-14 years old, but she was very good at English and she also published a book-'Flying Fingers'. In the video, she was talk about 'childish'. She thinks adults can learn a lot from students. And when in schol, teachers can't say do that, or don't do that. She likes writing, too. After look the video I think I want to be like her. I want I could do well at English more. Thank you.^^
Your response is mostly a summary, and a very short one at that. There is nothing really in this writing that tells the reader what you think or why you think that.
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